You can get paid to write a book. It's
easily possible to make a fast $10,000, or even a six figure amount. You could
even make seven figures --- over a million dollars for twenty pages of text.
It sounds incredible, but a fast seven figures is certainly possible if you have
a HOT, hot idea or have had an experience that hundreds of thousands of people
want to read about. In his 2001 book about writing non-fiction, Damn! Why
Didn't I Write That?, author Marc McCutcheon says that it's not hard to make
a good income: "you can learn the trade and begin making a respectable income
much faster than most people think possible".
The good part
is that you don't need to write your book before you get some money. You write a
proposal, and a publisher will give you an advance, which you can live on while
you write the book.
Writing a
proposal is the smart way to write a book. It's the way professional writers
sell non-fiction. Selling a book on a proposal is much easier than selling a
book that you've already written. A book proposal is a complete description of
your book. It contains the title, an explanation of what the book's about, an
outline of chapters, a market and competition survey, and a sample chapter.
A book
proposal functions in the same way as any business proposal does: you're making
an offer to someone you hope to do business with. It will be treated by
publishers in the same way that any business treats a proposal. A publisher will
read your proposal, assess its feasibility, cost it, and if it looks as if the
publisher will make money, the publisher will pay you to write the book. When
you've sold your proposed book to a publisher, your role doesn’t end with
writing your book. You’re in partnership with your publisher to ensure the
book's success. If you do your part, both you and your publisher will make
money.
The publisher's business is selling
books. The company acquires books which it hopes will sell, and sell well. Your
publisher is putting up the money to publish your book, so you need to approach
the project from his point of view as well as your own.
We haven’t got the space to
go into great detail about the publishing business here, but you need to know
about "returns", because the challenge of returns makes publishing different
from other businesses. Publishers sell books on consignment. Publishers ship
books to bookshops, and if a book isn’t sold within a certain time period, it's
destroyed. The bookseller strips the cover from the book and sends the cover to
the publisher for a full credit. This is the "return". If a title doesn’t sell,
the publisher takes a beating. As you can imagine, publishers are no more keen
to lose money than you or I.
What does
this mean to you as you write your book proposal? It means that your proposal
needs to emphasize the ways in which you, as the writer, will take
responsibility for the book's success.
You will try
to ensure the success of your book by gauging the marketplace. You will work out
who the likely buyers of your book might be, and the reasons they will have for
paying good money for your book. You'll assess the competition for your book.
You'll work out ways in which you can promote your book, so that people hear
about it. You're in partnership with your publisher, and if you're prepared to
take responsibility for that role, the publisher will be much more likely to buy
your proposal.
All non-fiction books are sold on
proposal. A book proposal is much easier to sell than a complete book.
Here are some of the
reasons:
It's easier to read a 20 or 30 page
proposal than a 400 page book;
It's easier to make changes in the
book's concept at the proposal stage;
With a proposal, the publisher, in
the person of your editor, can take ownership of the book. It's like bespoke
tailoring: the editor feels that the book has been specifically written for
the publishing house.
Even if you decide to write your book
first, you'll need to create a proposal once you've written it. No agent or
publisher is interested in reading an entire book to assess its viability.
That's the proposal's job: to ensure that your book has a niche in the
marketplace. As you do your research for the proposal, you'll work out whether
or not your book is likely to sell. You can shape the book at the proposal
stage, much more easily than you can when it’s a huge stack of print or a giant
computer file.
Sometimes you may get an
idea for a book, but the idea is amorphous, it doesn’t have a real shape. You
may want to write several thousand words to see whether the book becomes clearer
in your mind. But write the proposal before you write more than ten thousand
words, because your book must target a specific group of buyers.
You write a proposal step by step. In
this ebook, we'll work on your book proposal together. Each chapter has tasks
for you to complete. Once you've completed all the tasks, you'll have a book
proposal which has an excellent chance of selling.
Here's what we'll cover:
(Day One) Getting an idea for your
book.
(Day Two) Developing the idea and
expanding on it. Assessing the market. Who needs this book? What's the
competition for the book?
(Day Three) Writing the blurb.
Outlining your book.
(Day Four) Researching your book
proposal, and fleshing out your outline.
(Day Five) Writing a proposal query
letter. Sending your query letters to agents and publishers. (You send the
queries while you're working on the proposal. This helps you to gauge reaction
to your work.)
(Day Six) Writing the proposal.
(Day Seven) Writing the sample
chapter. Revising your proposal.
I'll be including a sample of a book
proposal for you to look at, so you can see what material the proposal contains.
This proposal garnered an agent contract the first time I sent it out. I'll also
include other samples, so that you have plenty of templates from which to
construct your own proposal.
First, read through the book, to see
what information it contains.
Next, work through the book,
chapter by chapter. As you read each chapter, do the tasks and the exercises in
the order in which they appear. Doing them will help you to write not just one,
but many book proposals. Remember, the primary aim of this book is to help you
write your first book proposal and be well on the way to selling it by the time
you've worked your way through all the chapters.
It's vital that you concentrate on
getting the words down on paper. As long as you have something on paper you can
fix it. As we work through the material, I'll be encouraging you to work FAST
and not think to much about what you're writing. Thinking has no business in
your first draft. Thinking comes later as you rewrite.
If you're on vacation you can set aside
a couple of weeks to work on your proposal. But what if you don't have a
vacation due? Easy! You can fit writing into your busy life. You'll still follow
all the steps, but it will take you longer. Try to stick to a set schedule. You
may decide that you'll complete a chapter a week, for example.
Work fast. Work on your book proposal
EVERY DAY, even if you only have five minutes to spare. This is because at the
beginning, ideas are fragile. Time spent with your proposal each day helps you
to build and maintain your energy and your enthusiasm.
Take your notebook and visit a
bookstore. Skim four non-fiction books of the kind which you hope to write.
Check the number of pages, the table of contents, and chapter length. How are
these books written? Are they written in a casual, tongue-in-cheek style like
the For Dummies series? Do they include lots of anecdotes and personal
information about the author?
In your notebook, write down
each book's title, author, publisher and year of publication. Also write down
anything you find interesting about the book. Scan the acknowledgements page to
see whether the author thanks her editor and her agent. Make a note of their
names if she does. (These people may be interested in your proposal if it covers
a similar subject area.)
Read the Idea Generators, and do at
least three of them, even if you've already got an idea for your book. Working
through this material is important because it will give you confidence that you
it's easy for you to find as many ideas as you need.
Create a file on your computer as a
diary for this project. Paste all the information you gather while searching the
Internet and while communicating with others in this log. Date each entry. If
you need to leave your project for a few days, you can read your log to get back
into the groove of your project.
A book proposal is a business document
which convinces a publisher to buy your book before you've written it. Your
proposal says, in effect: "Hey, I've got a great idea for a book which lots of
people will want to buy. Do you want to publish it?"
Think of it as a combination
brochure and outline of your proposed book.
There's a standard format of
material that your book proposal will need to cover. This doesn’t mean that you
need to hew completely to this format. It's just a guideline of topics your
proposal must contain.
Your book proposal must contain:
A title page,
with the title, subtitle, author, word count of the completed book, and
estimated time frame for completion. You might state: "75,000 words,
completion three months after agreement".
An overview: a description of
the book. This can be as short as a paragraph, or several pages long.
The background of the author.
Your biography, as it relates to your expertise for this book.
The competition in the
marketplace. This is where you mention the top four or five titles which are
your book's competitors. (Note: if there are dozens of competitors for your
book, this is a good thing, because it means that the subject area is popular.
Your book will need to take a new slant.)
Promotions.
This is where you describe how you will promote your book, both before and
after publication.
A chapter outline.
A sample chapter, or two
chapters. This is always the first chapter, and if you're sending two
chapters, it's the Introduction and Chapter One, or if there's no
Introduction, it's Chapters One and Two.
Attachments.
Optional. You may want to attach articles you've written about the book's
topic, or any relevant supporting material.
If you already have an idea for your
book, that's great. Please work through the material in this chapter using your
current idea, or join us in developing new ideas. Open a new computer file so
that you can work through the exercises as we progress.
There's nothing mysterious about coming
up with ideas. Within a page or two, you'll have more ideas than you know what
to do with. Your ideas start with YOU. When you think about what you enjoy,
about your past experiences and your knowledge, you're guaranteed a regular
fountain of ideas. Let's turn on the fountain.
As you do the following
exercises, work through them quickly. Don't allow yourself to bog down. Do them
as quickly as you can, and then go and do something else for a few hours, to let
the ideas gestate and bubble in your subconscious mind.
When you come back, read
through the ideas you generated, and add to them as you read through your lists.
Please don’t discard any ideas at this stage. This is because the
way to a brilliant, fantastic idea is by twisting an idea slightly, reversing
it, or by combining several ideas into a new one.
Searching for ideas alerts
your subconscious mind that ideas are important to you. Over the next few days,
you may get a nudge from an idea which says: "Write me down". Do that right
away, even if you're in the middle of a shower or you're driving along the
freeway. (If you’re driving, pull over.) Write that idea down, because even if
you're one hundred per cent certain that you will never in this lifetime forget
that amazing idea you just had, believe me, you will forget it. Write it down,
always.
When you stay alert to the
idea hovering at the corners of your consciousness you will never be without a
book bubbling away. This is how you turn your first book into a long series of
books.
First thing in the morning is a great time to generate
ideas. Set your alarm ten minutes early, then sit up in bed and jot down 50
ideas.
Make a list of 20 things you're good at.
Don't think too hard about this. Maybe you're good at buying presents for
people—you've got a knack for choosing just the right gift. Maybe you're a good
cook, or a good parent, or a good swimmer or a good tennis player. Or maybe you
used to be good at one or more of these things. For example: I grew up with
horses, and owned horses for many years. I'm good with horses, and a good rider.
If I saw a gap in the market for a horse book, I'd feel comfortable writing the
book.
You get the idea. List at
least 20 things that you're good at, or have been good at in the past. For
example, if you know you're an excellent gardener, even though you now live an
apartment, list "gardening".
Experiences sell. If you've been
abducted by little green men from Mars, it's a book. If you're a bigamist, it’s
a book. People have written books about their illnesses (see from challenge to
opportunity below), their addictions, and their pets. Browse through the
bestseller lists to see what personal experiences people are writing about.
Here's where
you walk down memory lane. If you're in your twenties, it'll be a short stroll.
If you’re in your forties or older, it will be a hike. Don't get bogged down
with this, list 20 experiences you've had that spring to mind.
The easiest way to come up
with experiences is to work backwards through the stages of your life, or
through decades. Again, don’t take a long time over this. Set yourself a time
limit --- ten minutes is enough.
What do you know? Start by making a list
of all the subjects you were good at in school. Then list all the jobs you've
had – yes, part time work counts.
Also list:
·Your hobbies. Are you a keen Chihuahua breeder? Do you quilt? Take photographs?
·Your current job. What are you
learning in your job that other people would pay to learn?
·The places you've lived. Your
hometown may be boring to you, but guide books sell well.
·Your family tree. What special
knowledge do your nearest and dearest have that you could write about?
Spend around ten minutes writing down as
many subjects as you have knowledge about.
Celebrity chef Nigella Lawson freely
admits that she cooks because she loves to eat. Nigella has turned her love of
food into a career. She regularly produces bestselling books. (Her chocolate
recipes are brilliant.) What do you love? People have written about garage
sales, cosmetics, cars, vacations. If you love something, chances are that
thousands or maybe millions of others will love it too.
Watch the newspapers and
take note of current trends. Or better yet, listen to what your children are
talking about, or asking you to buy for them. Children tend to be well up on
what’s happening.
Remember that
it will take around two years for your book to reach the bookstores. Therefore,
the currently hot topics on the bestselling lists may be old news before your
book is in the stores. This doesn’t mean of course that you can’t write on
perennial favourites like money, sex and exercise. These topics never go out of
popularity, and a new twist on one of these is always a sure bet.
The idea of
writing about what you enjoy is that you will be bringing passion and enthusiasm
to your topic. Enthusiasm is a must.
You face challenges every day. Most are
minor, some are major challenges. If you've ever faced a large challenge, or if
you're facing one right now, then consider that the things you learn could help
other people. Whatever your challenge is, whether it’s moving house or
confronting a life-threatening illness, other people face the same challenges,
and in those challenges lie the seeds of books.
Make a list of 20 challenges
you've faced in your life. Anything catastrophic qualifies: losing your job,
facing bankruptcy, the betrayal of a spouse. If you've had a quiet life, then
make a list of challenges that the people you know have faced.
Additional challenges you
can consider include any habit you've broken, from congenital lateness to
overeating.
When you've finished brainstorming,
you'll have dozens of book ideas. Winnow out the non-starters. Don't delete
them, move them to another computer file. Call it "odds and ends" or "snippets".
You've worked through the idea
generators, and you have one or more ideas which you feel would work as a book.
The next step is to scrutinize your primary idea carefully.
Consider your idea and look
at this list of questions. See if you can answer "Yes" to all of them:
þAm I enthusiastic enough about this
subject and my ideas about it to sell this proposal to an agent and an editor –
and to readers?
þWill I retain my enthusiasm through
the months it will take me to complete the book?
þIs there a market for my book? (I've
checked Amazon.com and bookshops for competing titles. I'm convinced there is a
market for my book.)
þI can find people with expert
knowledge to interview as I write my book.
þDoes my book provide solutions to
problems?
If you can answer YES to most of these
questions, you're set. Great! We're going to start work on your proposal.
The more you know about how non-fiction
books are constructed the more easily you'll be able to work on your own book
with confidence. Look at the books on your shelves at home, and at your local
library. (Be sure to make a note of any editor or agent acknowledgements.)
If you're feeling nervous now that
you're about to start this project, relax. Tell yourself that you will take it
step by step. All you need to do is work at it steadily, a word, sentence and
paragraph at a time, and you will complete your proposal, and then when you've
sold the proposal, you'll complete your book using the same easy-does-it method.
It takes persistence. There are as many
different kinds of writers as there are people. Some are young, some are
elderly, many are in-between. You don’t need any special writing talent to write
books, nor do you need to be highly educated. Many successful writers have never
completed high school. If you can write well enough to write a letter, you can
write a book.
Many professional writers make incomes
that would make doctors and lawyers envious. Most make reasonable incomes. If
you decide to make a career of writing non-fiction books, the major benefit is
that if you choose your book's topic with care, your book can stay in print for
many years. For each year that your book's in print, you get two royalty checks.
Let's say that you write two books a year for five years. At the end of the five
years, if your books all stay in print, you'll be getting ten royalty checks a
year. These ongoing royalties are your nest-egg, profitable investments in your
future.
As long as you research the market for
each book before you write as much as a single word, it's easy to sell a book.
Publishers need competent, reliable writers who can produce good books
regularly. This myth got started because --- let's be blunt here--- 99 per cent
of submissions to editors and publishers are not publishable.
You need to write a good book to get a
book published. That really is all you need to do. I started writing romance
novels and they were published by an English publisher. I certainly didn’t know
anyone in UK publishing; I live in Australia. If you have a contact in
publishing, by all means use that contact. However, it's not necessary.
Publishing is big business, and publishers need good books.
Developing your idea and assessing the
market go together. We'll work on both tasks today. The idea of working on both
tasks together is that as you read through the outlines of books which cover a
similar area to yours, you'll see what's already been published, and you'll get
fresh ideas for material that you can cover in your own book.
As you skim through other people's
books, jot down any thoughts and ideas you get. You should make a note of any
experiences you remember which you could include in your book. This is because
everyone loves a story, so no matter what subject area your book covers, include
your own anecdotes. If you're writing a diet book, include funny/ informative
stories about your own experiences with diets, or the experiences of your
friends.
You may want to use
fictitious names to protect people's privacy. You will definitely need to use
fictitious names if you can't contact people to ask for permission to use a
story or if you think there's a chance that people will be able to recognize
themselves from a story you tell that puts them in a bad light.
For example, perhaps you
belonged to a group of dieters, and you tell a story about another person in the
group. Even if this was 20 years ago, and you've given this person a fictitious
name, disguise the story: change the person's sex, age, and occupation.
Let's say you've decided to write a book
on natural healthcare for pets. You own several dogs and a cat, and are an
enthusiast for natural healthcare because it's worked for you and for your
friends. Today you're going to make copious notes. You're going to write down
everything you can think of which relates to your idea. It doesn’t matter
whether you use a computer file, or a pen and paper, sit down and get ready.
Ask yourself: who, what,
how, when, where and why. Make topic headings for each question. Then answer
each question. Don’t try to write in complete sentences, just make notes. For
example, if you took one of your dogs to a doggie chiropractor for several
years, note down the chiropractor's name, the dog's name, problems the dog had,
the number of sessions --- anything and everything you can remember. Also write
down what you don’t know, so you can find out. (One of the benefits of research
is that you get to answer all the questions you have about a topic.)
Take as much time as you
need. You may want to work in forty-minute sessions, and then go and do
something else for a while. Taking breaks is important. It's during the breaks
that your subconscious mind will go to work for you can scan your memory banks
to come up with more ideas.
Don’t discard any of
your ideas. And write down every idea, no matter how tangential. Your
mind works via associations. Therefore, if you get a notion to write down "Phips
--- broken leg" write this down, even if it seems that it has nothing to do with
natural healthcare for pets. Phips was your first dog, and was hit by a car.
This was 30 years ago, and you don’t remember much about the incident. However,
after writing it down, you ask your mother about Phips, and she tells you that
the little Corgi was bred by a woman who was into natural healthcare (you didn’t
remember this --- you may not even have known it, but somehow your subconscious
got you to write it down). You contact the woman, who's elderly, but who's a
fountain of useful information, and she provides almost a chapter of information
for your book. You'll find that you have many serendipitous incidents like this
as you write your proposal and your book.
At this stage, you don’t need the
perfect title, Healthcare for Pets will do as your working title. Make a
list of 20 title ideas as quickly as you can. (And save the list.)
Don't sweat a title. You'll
often find that the perfect title doesn't occur to you until you book is
completely written. Or, your publisher may come up with a title they want to
use.
Who could help you with information for
this book? Write down the name of everyone you can think of. Do this quickly,
you can look up their email address or postal address when the time comes to
contact them. At this stage, you just want a list of all those people who will
be able to help you.
Is there an association of
people who might help? In our Healthcare for Pets example, there will be
numerous veterinary associations and kennel club associations of people who
could provide valuable information.
Create an Acknowledgements
computer file. Whenever someone helps you with information for the book, type
their name into the Acknowledgements file. People get a kick out of helping an
author with a book, and the best way to thank them is to make sure that their
name appears on the Acknowledgements page in the book.
Start by visiting some large bookstores.
Take your notebook and a pen. Copy the Tables of Contents of books that treat
the same subject matter that your book does. You will want to make your book
significantly different from other books which cover the same topic. If
your book is exactly the same as other books on the topic, no publisher will be
interested in buying it. However, you shouldn’t be discouraged if there are many
books covering the area which you intend to cover. Lots of books mean that this
area is very popular. For example, publishers bring out dozens of diet books
each year. And there's room for yours, too!
Aim for at
least three to five points of difference. This doesn’t mean that you have to
come up with all new information. In fact, presenting completely new information
is impossible. Sticking with our diet book example, there's only one way to lose
weight, and that's to take in fewer calories than you expend. Authors reveal
this ghastly news to their readers in many ways. Therefore, it's how you present
the material that counts. If you can show readers a new way to diet, and you can
prove that your method works, you're in, with a hot seller on your hands.
Next, drive to the library. Ask the
librarian for Books In Print. This is a multi-volume set of
reference books which lists all the books currently available by author, subject
and title. Your library may have the books, or it may have the BIP CDs. If your
library's BIP is on CD, get a printout of all the books in your subject area.
Don't faint if you see an
ultra-lengthy list! Several years ago when I was assessing the market for a book
on time management, BIP spat out ten-plus pages. I got all the books which
sounded as though they might be similar via inter-library loan, and none
resembled my book at all. So the fact that there are lots and lots of books
means little other than that this subject is popular. This is a good thing!
Next check out
Forthcoming Books. FC should be available at your library right near BIP.
FC lists all those books which will be released in the next six months.
You'll want to have the
books which are the main competition for your book on hand if possible. You
don't have to buy them all. You can borrow them from the library, or if they’re
listed on Amazon.com, you can use Amazon.com's clever "Look Inside" technology,
so that you can scan the contents pages of competing titles.
Amazon.com is your next port of call.
Type the subject of your book into the search query box, and you'll get a list
of all those books which touch on your subject area. Print out this list. Having
the list handy helps you when the time comes to pick a title.
Read the descriptions, and
all the reviews of any books which sound as if they might be similar to yours.
Now you've finished surveying the
marketplace as it stands for your idea, take the time to write a brief report on
what you've discovered. This report is for your own use. Do this right away when
it's all still fresh in your mind. It's important to do this, because when you
talk to your editor or agent, you'll want to have all the information on the
market situation handy. Your report doesn’t have to be long. A page will do.
Blurbs sell books. Everyone from the
publisher who initially buys the proposal, to the book store owner who stocks
your book will decide whether they’re interested in your book based on the blurb
alone.
Become a connoisseur of
blurbs. Start your own blurb collection. Each time you see a blurb which you
think is effective, copy it, and put it into your Blurb File.
The "blurb" is the back cover material
for your book --- the selling points which will get people to buy the book. If
you write the blurb before you write an outline, you're guaranteed not to wander
off the track as you write your book.
I can’t emphasize the
importance of your blurb enough. If you've been thinking of skipping this
section, please don't. Here are some reasons to write your blurb first:
·it keeps you focused on the theme of
your book;
·it makes writing the outline easier;
·it makes selling your proposal
easier;
·it will assure your agent and editor
that you know what you're doing, and they'll feel comfortable working with you
and handing over the advance;
·when you've sold the book, and the
time comes to write it, you'll have an easier time because you can keep the
blurb at the forefront of your mind.
Your blurb is the "sales story" for your
book. If your agent becomes enthusiastic about your book, she'll become
enthusiastic on the basis of your blurb. She'll use the blurb as her sales pitch
to other people. For example, when she talks to an editor at a publishing house
who may be interested in your book, she'll start with your blurb. The
conversation will stop there if the editor doesn’t see the book's potential.
Let's say that the editor likes the blurb enough to look at the proposal. If
she's still keen, it's her turn to sell your book, on the basis of the blurb,
to the other people in the publishing company. She'll need to convince Sales and
Marketing that they can sell your book. If they're not keen, you won’t get an
offer.
When you've written your
book, your publisher will try to sell your book to book distributors, and later
to booksellers, all on the basis of the blurb that you started out with. So the
time that you spend working on the blurb is not wasted, it's the most important
part of your book. Without a good blurb, your book will not come into existence.
Having said all that, it's
also important that you don't obsess over your blurb. Everything you write can
be fixed, so focus on getting your blurb written, in various lengths, rather
than striving to make your blurb perfect. Your blurb may well go through many
incarnations: you'll make changes, your agent may want changes, and your editors
will definitely want changes.
The first is
from my book LifeTime: Better Time Management in 21 Days, published by
Prentice Hall in 1997. I wrote this blurb while I was working to gather material
for the book. It took me around ten minutes to write. You'll often find that as
you're starting to work on book, your blurb will come to you as a flash of
inspiration. If it doesn’t, don’t worry about it, just follow the process
outlined below.
The second is
from my book Making The Internet Work For Your Business which was
published by Allen & Unwin in 1998. I didn't write this blurb until the book was
complete, and the publisher was sending a brief to the cover designer. This
blurb took me a long time to write. I also had a lot of trouble writing the
book, and I think that if I'd written the blurb before I started, I would have
had a much easier time with the book, and would have enjoyed writing it more.
You're about
to meet a very powerful genie. This genie will give you all the time you need to
be everything you want to be, to do everything you want to do, and to have
everything you want to have --- you are this genie!
LifeTime:
Better Time Management in 21 Days shows
you how to manage your time so that you can achieve any goals you set for
yourself. You'll learn to feel focused and relaxed as you achieve your goals.
Spend 21
days with LifeTime: Better Time Management in 21 Daysand in just
20 minutes a day you'll learn to how to:
vFocus, so that you get more done in
less time;
vSeparate tasks into the urgent and
the important;
vEffectively prioritise and delegate
tasks;
vPractise relaxation daily until it
becomes a habit;
vDetermine your values, so that you
can set appropriate goals;
vAnd become more creative.
Each day's
reading will give you ideas, inspiration and motivation, as well as simple tasks
to help you develop your time management skills.
(The above blurb is around 200 words.
Create several versions of your blurb at different lengths --- more on this
below.)
When you use
the Internet for your business you don’t need to wait for customers to come to
you because a Web site is a 24-hour sales force to the whole world. Making
The Internet Work For Your Business offers clear and practical advice on how
to use the Internet to develop your business; how to promote your products and
services; how to find vital information; and how to pursue new business
opportunities.
This book
includes the following features:
vIntroduces online basics and
describes the equipment you will need to get your business online and build your
own Web site;
vOffers practical advice on how to
expand your business online, including tips on your site's useability, how to
market your Web site, and how to boost Internet sales;
vProvides case studies of how people
are using the Internet inexpensively and simply to develop their businesses;
vIncludes a fast-finder directory of
useful resources available to businesses on the Internet: company contacts and
suppliers; trainers and educators; financial sites; government and legal
information; human resources; freebies on the Internet; and other SOHO-related
resources.
By using the
Internet you can run more business more efficiently with lowered costs, fewer
staff, and less space requirement, and have more time to develop your business
creatively. Explore the advantages to your business of e-commerce using your Web
site as a merchant commerce system that can handle orders, payment and
fulfilment via the site.
The above blurb runs to almost 250
words, which is a little long. If I were writing the book now, I would make it
shorter and punchier.
The one-sentence version of
the blurb is: "Making The Internet Work For Your Business offers clear
and practical advice on how to use the Internet to develop your business; how to
promote your products and services; how to find vital information; and how to
pursue new business opportunities."
Before you start writing your blurb, ask
yourself: who will be reading this book? This question is important,
because it helps you to picture the reader as you write. Once you have an image
of your ideal reader in your mind, you'll find it's much easier to work on your
book. Working out who your readers will be also gives you a head start in
writing the marketing section of your book proposal.
Let's stay with the book on
natural healthcare for pets. Who would be interested in this book? Make a list.
Your list could start with: pet owners who use natural healthcare, companies
that manufacture natural petcare products, and veterinary surgeons.
Then go on and create your
blurb in the following easy steps.
Your reader will buy the book because of
the benefits the book gives her. Features are different from benefits. For
example, you may be presenting recipes for making pet remedies. The pet remedies
is a feature. The benefit of the pet remedies could be that they save the
reader trips to the vet and money on expensive commercial products. YOU MUST USE
THE BENEFITS IN YOUR BLURB.
First list all of the
features your book will contain. Then make a list of all the benefits.
Take down three or four
books from your shelves, and study their blurbs. Do they list the benefits? How
are the benefits presented?
(You'll occasionally find
that the author and publisher, not to mention the publisher's sales and
marketing departments, were all asleep when the book was in production, and the
blurb contains a long list of features. Work out how you’d convert those
features into benefits. This is excellent practise for you.)
Rank the benefits in their order of
importance. You may want to get some help here. Read your list of benefits to a
friend, and ask how she'd rank them.
In addition to your list of benefits,
your blurb can contain an intriguing fact, or a short anecdote. For example, if
you once saved the life of your pet with a natural healthcare remedy, you could
tell this story as part of your blurb.
When you've completed your
blurb, in around 200 to 300 words, create shorter versions. Create one of 100
words, another of 50 words, and you can even try to pare it down to 25 words.
Here's a one
sentence version of the sample blurb for LifeTime: "LifeTime: Better
Time Management in 21 Days shows you how to manage your time so that
you can achieve any goals you set for yourself." As you can see, the sentence is
taken from the longer blurb.
Publishers love cover testimonials,
because they know that they sell books. How many times have you bought a book
because someone you'd heard of and respected recommended the book to you? If you
know anyone famous, or can get in touch with them, now's the time to contact
them to ask them whether they'd be willing to read your book and provide a quote
for you to use on the cover.
This is where your blurb comes into its
own. You can develop a basic outline from your blurb as a mind map, or cluster
diagram. For each book I've written, I've used mind maps. Because a book is
long, it's hard to keep the whole thing straight in your mind --- mind maps help
you to do this.
Here's a sample mind map for
Making The Internet Work For Your Business:
Diagramming your initial
ideas of what you'd like the book to contain gives you an overview, from which
you can develop a more detailed outline. Go through all the material you've
gathered so far, and insert headings into your mind map.
Remember that at this stage,
nothing is set in stone. Just work as quickly as you can, don’t think too much
about it. You just want to get an idea of how much material you have.
Working from your mind map, create a
chapter outline of your book. The easiest way to do this is just to write
numbers from one to ten or one to 15 down the page, and type in chapter
headings. Most books have around ten to 15 chapters. If yours has more than 15,
that's fine.
Only got
three or four headings? No matter how little material you have, or how much,
don’t worry. This is the initial stages, remember. Just work quickly so that you
get something down on paper. Tomorrow we'll be researching your book, and as you
research, you're sure to find many more headings for your outline.
In these very early stages
of working on your proposal, your subconscious mind is your greatest resource.
Therefore, if you get an impulse to write down something, write it down, even if
it doesn’t make much sense to you. The reason you got this idea will come to
you.
It's a good idea to create a research
plan to guide you, both in writing your proposal, and later in writing your
book. Knowing that you can find all the information you need is a
confidence-builder.
Remember that this is just a proposal,
you're not writing the complete book. Therefore, you may not need to do any
research at all. You may have all the material you need. If this is the case,
you can go right on to fleshing out your outline.
If you need to gather
material, then first you should develop a research plan. This may take you an
hour or two, but it's time well spent. You will use this plan first to develop
your proposal, and later when you’re writing your book. For your proposal, you
probably won’t need to go past # 6 in your plan to get all the information you
need.
1. Develop a frame of reference, and
write it down as a complete sentence, using no more than 25 words. The shortest
blurb you wrote should work well for this step.
2. Next, mind map or outline everything
you need to research. This is to give you a quick overview. It's a good idea to
print this mind map out so that you can glance at it as you work. You'll find
that if you're online, or at the library, it's tempting to explore other
avenues. These avenues may well be productive, and you can explore them at some
stage, but not while you're trying to write your proposal. Once you start
writing, your only goal should be: "get it done".
3. Do a general search on the Web using
a search engine like Google.com to locate additional areas you could explore.
4. If you find mention of any online
groups or mailing lists which seem appropriate for your subject, join them. The
members may be able to provide you with anecdotes or other information.
5. Make a note of companies which are
mentioned in your Web search. Can they help you? The benefit of asking companies
to help you in your research is free, current information. Most companies will
be only too pleased to help, for the PR boost you can give them. Make a note to
yourself to acknowledge them in your book. If any company has given you a lot of
help, it's a nice gesture to send them a copy when the book's published.
6. Check periodical indices for articles
which might be useful. Once you needed to trudge along to the library for this
kind of help, but LexisNexis (http://www.lexis.com/
) is faster.
7. Are there any books which could help
you? Try
www.amazon.com to find recent books on your topic. (You may already have
notes on these books which you collected while you were trying to come up with
an idea for a book.)
8. Original sources. This is where your
list of contacts comes in useful. Make a note of people you will want to
interview, first for your proposal, and later, for your book.
9. Experts and organisations.
STOP!
Don't collect more information than you need to write your proposal
Creating your research plan
shouldn’t take you more than an hour, or two hours maximum. Until you get
into the writing process, whether it's your proposal, or the book itself, you
won’t know exactly what you need. As long as you have sufficient material for
that day's work, you've got enough information.
We'll do more work on the outline and
first chapter later this week. But, because they form such a big part of your
proposal, start working on them now, as you research.
Here's a process I use to combine
research and writing, and just get the bones of the work done. This is a process
you can use when you're writing anything. Use it for your proposal, the
book itself, writing advertising material – I even use it for writing copy for
businesses and for novels. The best thing about this process is that it stops
you from getting stuck.
1) Idea/ topic/ subject
2) Ten minutes of research
3) Word lists
4) Timed free-writing for five minutes
5) Take a break
6) First draft
1. Idea/ topic/ subject
If you've got an idea you want to
develop, write it at the top of a sheet of paper.
In this
instance, write the title you've chosen for your first chapter. I use colored
pencils and paper for this part of the process so that I can doodle all around
the page, but feel free to open a new document in your word processor if you
want to type.
If you don't
have a topic or a title for your chapter, just get a blank sheet of paper or
open a new document, and keep following the steps of the process.
2. Ten minutes of research
This research process is really just an
early-warning for your subconscious mind, to stimulate it and to get it to start
coming up with material.
I tend to
browse the Web for research whatever I happen to be working on, because I can
always find something that starts me thinking. For example, one week I was ready
to work on five radio spots for a jewellery store. I browsed online jewellery
stores, and museum sites. Within five minutes I hit on an information nugget
that stimulated a train of thought. Whatever topic you're writing on for your
proposal, browse a few Web sites which are related.
3. Word lists
I love word lists. They take no effort
at all, and they're ideal for kick-starting any kind of writing. I use them for
fiction, for non-fiction and for copywriting. I also write them just for
practice, to get my brain ticking over. Here's part of a word list I wrote this
morning: "Glamor fear isolation energy deliver storm glow wind moon rush
generosity travel stream voice density". You can see that on one level, it's
just a laundry-list of words. On another level, what if I asked you to write
half a page of a story, using these three words: "Fear Storm Generosity"
somewhere in the first paragraph? You could do it, and you'd find it easy.
I could use
this list to develop a scene for a chapter in a novel, or to develop a new
character for the novel. But I'm currently working on an advertorial for digital
imaging products for a computer magazine, so the word list gives me some ideas
to play with for that. The list even gives me some ideas I could develop for
magazine articles and essays. Not bad for fifteen words which took a few seconds
to write.
For your book
proposal, just start making lists of words. The idea is not to direct your
thoughts at all, just list all the words which spring to mind. Don’t limit
yourself with words directly related to the subject of you proposal. You may
never use your word lists in your work at all. I think of them as ways of
prodding my subconscious. After I've filled half a page of words, I may or may
not use them. I don't look on writing the lists as a waste of time, however,
because writing them gets me into a creative mood.
4. Timed free-writing for five minutes
The topic for your free-writing session
will be the title of your first chapter.
I'm a fan of
free-writing. If you haven't read Peter Elbow's amazing books, particularly
Writing With Power, get hold of the book as soon as you can. After reading it, I
guarantee you you'll never have problems with getting words onto the page ever
again.
Timed
free-writing is just what it sounds like. You set a timer, and put pen to paper,
or get your fingers traveling across the keyboard. At the end of the time you
set, you stop writing. You don't have to write in complete sentences. You can
write fragments of thoughts, or even write a word list. Just write whatever
words appear in your mind. Don't put any pressure on yourself. Even if you have
a report that needs to be finished in an hour, don't make the subject of your
report the topic for your free-writing session. Let whatever words want to come
out, emerge. You can whine onto the page about how hard writing is for five
minutes, if you wish. If you do, you'll feel better for having released that
limiting thought.
5. Take a break
Close your notebook, switch off your
computer and leave your desk. Your break can be short, but take at least ten
minutes. Preferably half an hour or an hour. I mean it --- LEAVE YOUR DESK.
6. First draft
When you return to your desk, don't look
at any of your word lists, or your free-writing session. Just start to work on a
first draft of your outline, and some material for your first chapter. Write as
quickly as you can.
I do first
drafts on the computer, and I try to type fast, just following whatever thoughts
happen to strike me, and not paying any attention to typos or to format. If I'm
writing an article or advertising copy, or anything which is under a thousand
words, I write the first draft straight through. I aim to take an hour or less
to do this. At this stage, my aim is just to get the words written. I can worry
about whether they're the right words later. Right now, I just want words.
You will find
that the words come quickly, and that you not only outline your first chapter,
but several additional chapters.
You don't need to create the kind of
outline that your English teacher harassed you into creating when you were 12.
The kind of outline you need to create is one based on components. Non-fiction
is much easier to write than fiction because all non-fiction books similar
components. Let's have a look at some of them:
A
foreword. This is similar to an introduction, but a foreword is usually
written by someone other than the author of the book. It helps if you can get
someone famous to contribute the foreword.
Note: They may expect payment for this. If this person would lend great
credibility to your book, then consider paying them for the foreword. It could
make the difference between whether your proposal is easy to sell, or more
difficult. If you’re writing in an area in which you don’t have professional
expertise --- for example, if you're writing about a medical topic and you're
not a doctor --- then getting a foreword written by a professional is
worthwhile.
An
introduction. This is optional. If you can't think of anything to put in an
introduction, leave it out. Think of including an introduction if you want to
tell your own story: how you came to get the information you're about to
share.
A "How To
Use This book" chapter or page. This can be short, or quite long. For example,
if you're writing a book on yoga, you could use this chapter to give four or
five exercise routines, compiled from the various poses that you discuss in
the rest of the book.
Chapters
with problems and solutions. For example, if you were writing a book on
dieting, you could write seven chapters all posing a typical problem, and then
provide solutions for each problem.
The last
chapter is the wrap-up. In this chapter you'll want to give readers
instructions on where they go from here, and you'll also want to include an
inspirational message.
A
glossary is useful if it will be necessary for readers new to the subject
area. For example, if your book contains a lot of industry jargon with which
your reader is unfamiliar, give explanations of terminology here.
An index.
I'm always disappointed when an otherwise excellent book, that I'll be
referring to again, omits an index. I know creating an index is a hassle, but
if you think your readers will use it, then go the extra mile and include it.
If your book needs photos or other
graphics, start thinking about them now. For example, if you’re writing about
petcare, then by all means send along a couple of relevant photos or graphics
with your proposal. However, illustrative material is only useful if it adds
value for the reader. Do the other books which cover the same subject as your
book include graphics?
If you decide that your book
must have graphics, mention this in your proposal. Send along an image or two,
even if you've only taken them with your own digital camera.
Finding an agent/ publisher is the first
step to selling your book proposal. However, even after you've sold your
proposal, you'll want to stay current with agent and publisher news in order to
sell your next proposal, and the one after that.
Start a contact list of
agents and publishers, and as you find snippets of information online, or in
your offline reading, enter notes into your database. Information you might want
to add includes: recent sales and the amount the book was sold for, movements of
editors from one publishing house to the next, and publishing house changes.
Collecting and maintaining
all this information shouldn’t be viewed as a chore. It's vital business
intelligence. It could also help you to increase your income by many thousands
of dollars each year.
Agents and publishers take time to
respond. So today you'll create a query letter for your proposal, and will send
it out to ten agents and publishers. You can choose to send only to agents, or
only to publishers, or you may want to send out five to each group.
Now you're written the blurb for your
book, and the chapter outline, the next step is to start asking agents and
publishers whether they’re interested in looking at the proposal for your book.
This means that you'll send out a query letter, asking agents and publishers to
look at your proposal.
Note: some new authors want
to omit this step. They figure --- hey, I'll just send the complete proposal,
so I get a response faster. Unfortunately, sending a complete unsolicited
proposal will SLOW the process. Agents and publishers receive so many packages
of material that they stack them in a spare office, and the office junior gets
to read them once every couple of months. Send a query letter, then send the
proposals to those people who've asked to see it.
Yes. And no. It can sometimes be harder
to get an agent than it is to get a publisher, so it's a good idea to query
both. When you get an agent, you can tell the agent which publishers you've
already queried. If you get an agent before you get a publisher, you can
approach agents who are a good fit for your book to ask them whether they will
handle the contract negotiations for you.
You definitely need an agent
if you intend to write more than one book. As to whether you should go
agent-hunting, the answer is a definite yes. This isn't only because an agent
will take a lot of the submission and negotiation workload, and because the
agent has (one hopes) her fingers constantly on the pulse of publishing and
knows what’s going on, it's also because an agent forms a handy cut-off switch
between you and the publisher. When problems occur --- let's say that your
editor's demands annoy you, or that your advance payments are late, you've got
someone to gripe at other than your editor.
On the other hand, if you'd
rather keep all the profits your book makes, and feel that you can handle your
contract negotiations yourself, you may want to skip agents, and focus on
publishers.
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writing there are scam artists. This page, maintained by the Science Fiction and
Fantasy Writers of America Inc, gives you the low-down (pun intended) on
literary scammers.
Note: things change fast online. Do
your own "literary agents" query on
www.Google.com and other search engines for additional agent information
and listings.
Many large publishers will not look at
unagented material. However, this still leaves many who will. And most will look
at any letter that you care to send them. Because a publisher can buy your book,
and because you're likely to get a much faster response from a publisher than
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magazine listings and a library of useful articles.
Once you start marketing your proposal,
you'll find that some agents and publishers include words like "no multiple
submissions" when they're telling authors how they want to receive proposals. In
other words, they want exclusivity. Unfortunately, there's a big problem with
this. The problem is time. Most agents and editors will take a month or longer
to evaluate your proposal. Some take as long as six months. Considering that you
may need to approach 20 to 30 editors and/ or publishers, you could still be
sending out your book three years from now. Professional writers ignore these
admonitions, because if they didn’t, they wouldn’t eat.
What goes into a query letter? I've
included a sample query letter that I've sent out, and which garnered an agent
contract immediately. You'll see that this letter is:
Short;
To the point.
I could have spent a lot longer
composing this letter --- I could have included a better hook, and included the
book's blurb. At the time I sent it out however, I didn’t have the time to spend
on revisions. I'm including this plain-vanilla, so-so query letter here for a
reason. That is --- and I've found this to be true in 25 years of writing ---
it's important that you SHOW UP. In other words, while you might want each piece
of writing you send out to be perfect, or at least brilliant, sometimes you
don’t have the time. At those times, send it out anyway.
Get into the habit of
treating your work with a certain amount of aplomb. That is, even thought it's
not perfect, and you could make it better if you had the time and energy, 90
per cent of the time what matters is that you send out your work. If you're
a closet perfectionist, as I am, this will be hard for you at first.
XXX
XXX
[DATE]
Dear XX
My name is
Angela Booth. I'm seeking representation for my book: 7 Days To Easy-Money---
Copywriting Success.
The book is
aimed at writers who would like to make money by copywriting (writing for
business). As a copywriter, writers write the words that sell: everyday words.
The words on ads, leaflets, brochures, press releases, product instructions and
labels, newsletters, direct mail, and on Web sites.
I've been
selling the material as an ebook and as an e-course on my Web site (http://www.digital-e.biz/
) for several months. It has been well received, and now I'd like to take the
material and use it as the basis for a book.
Although
there are several popular books on copywriting, none approach the material in a
step-by-step fashion. My book's constructed so that at the end of seven days and
seven lessons, the reader has built a viable freelance copywriting business.
My
credentials for writing the book: I've been both a successful copywriter and
writer for over 25 years. I've included a brief bio below.
Please let
me know if you'd like to see a proposal for the book.
Sincerely
Angela Booth
Bio:
Australian
author and journalist Angela Booth writes about business, technology, women's
issues, and creativity. Her books include: LifeTime: Better Time Management in
21 Days, Home Sweet Office: Your Home Office, Improve Your Memory in 21 Days,
and Making the Internet Work for Your Business. Her feature articles have
appeared in The Australian Women's Weekly, Woman's Day, New Idea, Vogue, and
numerous other print and online magazines.
~~Angela
Booth partial list of credits~~
A
professional writer for 25 years, her credits include:
* Feature
articles for mass market women's magazines in Australia and the US, including
The Australian Women's Weekly, Woman's Day, New Idea and Vogue;
* Feature
articles for computer magazines;
* Content
work for Web sites and Internet newsletters, including the Internet Business
Forum (http://ibizhome.com/)
* Business
books for major publishers, including many books in Prentice Hall's WorkWise
series (translated into several Asian and European languages);
* A series
of romance novels for Macdonald Futura UK.
At her
Digital-e --- Info to Go Web site (http://www.digital-e.biz/), Angela Booth
publishers three popular ezines: Creative Small Biz and Your EveryDay Write,
which are free to subscribers, and Freelance Copy Write, which has paying
subscribers. She also teaches online writing courses.
Here's another sample query letter. At
the time of writing, I haven't sent out this letter. Again however, you can see
that it's short, to the point, and contains nothing irrelevant. Over the years,
I've found that whether I'm pitching (selling) nonfiction or fiction, I've had
the best responses to letters which were less than one page in length.
Remember that nothing is set
in stone. It's all an experiment. Write your letter at whatever length seems
best to you. Your motto should be: "whatever works".
XXXX
XXXX
[DATE]
Dear XX
My name is
Angela Booth. I'm seeking representation for my book: Writing To Sell In the
Internet Age. The target audience is writers, and aspiring writers, who want
to be paid for their skill with words.
Writing
To Sell In the Internet Age discusses the new
earning power that Internet technology gives writers. Many writers are
comfortable using the Internet for email and research, but most are unaware that
they now have many new opportunities, including:
Clever new ways to market their work and services with
tools like autoresponders, email mini-courses, ebooks, and promotional ezines;
The opportunity to develop a loyal following of readers.
They can write and publish instantly, to a worldwide audience millions strong,
with tools like Web logs (blogs);
The ability to target specific niches, and to garner an
income much faster than they can via traditional publishing routes. A writer
can write an ebook or report this month, and sell it forever.
I've been
selling this material as an ebook and as an e-course on my Web site (http://www.digital-e.biz/
) for several months. It has been well received, and now I'd like to take the
material and use it as the basis for a book.
My
credentials for writing the book: I've been an author, writer and copywriter
over 25 years. I've been online since 1993, and know the online world well.
(I've included a brief bio below.)
As far as
I'm aware, there's no other book currently on the market which presents this
material. The few Internet-related books for writers currently available came
out around 2000, during the height of the dot com boom, and focus on online
markets for writers.
Please let
me know if you'd like to see a proposal for the book.
The next step is to write your own query
letter. Don’t take too long over this. Make a couple of notes of points you want
to include, and write it. You can include your blurb --- your blurb could in
fact make up the bulk of your letter.
Please don't say that you're successful
or that you've written a bestseller. Only beginning writers make claims like
this. The agent or editor will immediately classify you as a novice, and an
irritating one at that.
(On the other hand, if a
well-known much-published writer has praised you or your book, say so, and give
his/ her contact details so that the editor can call him/ her.)
The agent will figure it out when you
don’t mention writing credits. Please note: THIS IS NOT A BAD THING. Everyone
has to start somewhere. Editors and agents know this, and they won’t hold it
against you. They will judge your book proposal query on its merits. If an agent
feels that your material is something that she can sell, she will contact you.
As will an editor, if she feels that the writing in your query letter is to the
point and professional, and she thinks that your book idea is a good one.
Unless these people have publishing
credits, no one cares. Mentioning them marks you not only as an amateur, but
also as someone who may be difficult to work with.
What do I mean by "difficult
to work with"? Before you sign a contract, your agent and editor will judge your
behaviour, looking for tell-tale signs that you might be a problem writer.
Problem
writers:
oArgue when asked to rewrite. Almost
everything you write will need to be rewritten. Your agent will ask you to add,
delete or revise material in your proposal. Your editor will ask for rewrites on
your book, and perhaps more than one rewrite. Therefore, if you show any sign
that you may drag your feet over these chores, or do them without a song on your
lips, they will dump you. Life's too short, and publishing is too competitive to
indulge anyone's temperament;
oProcrastinate. Publishing is always
on a tight deadline. From the day of your first contact, you must show that you
can work to deadline.
oCan't follow instructions. Never be
afraid to ask if there is something you don’t understand. For example, if you're
asked for a "bio" and you don’t know how to write one, ask. No one will think
less of you for asking, but they will take several steps backward if you don’t
follow instructions, or if you decide that you will do things your way.
oTurn in a messy or less-than-pristine
typescript. Or fail to send an electronic file when asked.
Many writers are never asked for a
proposal because they don’t nail the query letter. If you tell an agent your
book is about "growing up in the fifties", the agent will simply ignore you.
This is not specific enough. You must be totally specific, so that the person
you're writing to can visualise the book, and can also visualise where it will
fit into the marketplace.
Writers do this sort of
thing because they're insecure. They imagine that if they're vague, the agent
will ask to see their book because they want to know exactly what it's about.
This is a HUGE mistake. Agents and editors receive hundreds of letters and
proposals each week. If you're not specific, you give the impression that you
haven’t thought out your proposal.
Today's the big day. You're going to
write your book proposal. If you're starting to freeze up at the thought, relax.
You've already done a lot of preparation work, and you're not going to write it
all at once. You'll write it by taking the proposal through several clearly
defined stages:
A. First draft.
This is your "thinking" draft, in which you think on paper. In this draft, you
write whatever you like. You're aiming for quantity here, rather than quality.
Write this draft full-steam ahead, without stopping to look things up. Consider
"writing" this draft by talking into a tape recorder.
If you need to do some spot
research, just leave a note to yourself, and keep working on the draft. You can
look up individual items later. The benefit of doing specific research later is
that you may find it's unnecessary. It's quite possible that you'll eliminate
this material from a later draft.
B. Your second draft.
Your first draft has shown you what you want to say. In this draft, you have a
crack at saying it. In your second draft, you organize. You decide what material
you want to include, and perhaps expand on, and what material you'll delete.
Think of this draft as shaping your material.
Occasionally you'll want to
take this shaping draft through several documents. You may have a B1, B2, B3 and
B4 version, for example.
Keep your
drafts.
Use the "File, Save As" menu option
of your word processor to keep versions of your book proposal. When you change
the name of the file as you work through different versions, it means that you
can always go back and reinsert something that you deleted, because it's in a
previous version.
C. Your clean-up draft.
Your final draft. You've said what you want to say, now you get a chance to say
it better. You clean up the redundancies and spice it up.
Paradoxically, the easiest way to write
well is to allow yourself to write badly. Every day. This is because writing is
hard when you try to think and write at the same time. Allow yourself to think
on paper for as many drafts as you need. Then write the final draft with
confidence.
Woody Allen once said that
90 per cent of success at anything was just showing up. I've found that that's
very true. So no matter how bad you feel your writing is at any given time, go
ahead anyway. Your writing is not as bad as you think, it's simply a crisis of
confidence, and even if it is rough when you first get it on the computer
screen, it can be fixed. However, if you hesitate, and don’t get it on the
computer screen, you have nothing to fix. Get it done!
At the end of
this book, in the Appendix, you'll find the complete proposal for my book 7
Days To Easy Money: Copywriting Success. This is a real proposal, and
it won an agent contract on first reading. Read it through so that you can see
exactly what goes into creating a proposal.
We've already
covered what your proposal must contain, here it is again, for reference. Please
print this page out:
A title page,
with the title, subtitle, author, word count of the completed book, and
estimated time frame for completion. You might state: "75,000 words,
completion three months after agreement".
An overview: a description of
the book. This can be as short as a paragraph, or several pages long.
The background of the author.
Your biography, as it relates to your expertise for this book.
The competition in the
marketplace. This is where you mention the top four or five titles which are
your book's competitors. (Note: if there are dozens of competitors for your
book, this is a good thing, because it means that the subject area is popular.
Your book will need to take a new slant.)
Promotions.
This is where you describe how you will promote your book, both before and
after publication.
A chapter outline.
A sample chapter, or two
chapters. This is always the first chapter, and if you're sending two
chapters, it's the Introduction and Chapter One, or if there's no
Introduction, it's Chapters One and Two.
Attachments.
Optional. You may want to attach articles you've written about the book's
topic, or any relevant supporting material.
You've already been working on a major
part of the proposal --- the chapter outline. If you like, you can begin today's
work by spending an hour or two with that. If your chapter outline still has
major holes in it, don't worry too much about it. Today we'll complete an
initial draft of the complete proposal, and you can fill in the gaps later.
The first
piece of info you'll need to include in the background section is a brief bio.
Every book you own has a bio of the author, so take a few books off your
shelves and study the author bios. Most are short. Novelists' bios mention the
writer's interests, partner, children and pets. The bios of nonfiction writers
(that's you) emphasize the writer's academic credentials if it's important to
the writer's credibility, or the writer's experience in the field the book
covers, or anything else which might be relevant.
Here's an
example of a bio, which I wrote as part of the book proposal for: 7 Days To
Easy Money: Copywriting Success--
Quick Bio
Australian
author and journalist Angela Booth has been writing successfully for 25 years.
She writes about business, technology, women's issues, and creativity. Her books
include: LifeTime: Better Time Management in 21 Days, Home Sweet
Office: Your Home Office, Improve Your Memory in 21 Days, and
Making the Internet Work for Your Business. Her feature articles have
appeared in magazines like Energy for Women, The Australian Women's Weekly,
Woman's Day, New Idea, Vogue, and numerous other print and online magazines.
She's also a working copywriter, writing copy for businesses ranging from
international corporations to small businesses with less than five employees.
Your bio must be slanted so that it
relates to those experiences which make you the perfect person to write the book
you're proposing. For example, let's say that in your daily life you're a
doctor. The book you're proposing is a gardening book: how to grow your own
organic vegetables. In your bio, might call yourself "Dr. Jane Smith", but for
this bio, you’d mention that you grew up on a farm, have grown organic
vegetables for ten years, and write a monthly column for Eat Your Organic
Veggies Magazine. Your experiences as a doctor wouldn’t be appropriate for
this book. On the other hand (just to confuse you), if you intended to cover the
health and nutritional benefits of organic vegetables at great length, then your
credentials as a doctor would be important, and you'd include them.
Please remember that there is no
way you can do any of this wrong --- something either works, or it doesn't.
You can always make changes later, when you get feedback .
Many of my writing students focus so much on the "correct" way of doing
something, that they never get anything done. Join any writing group, and
discussions of correct formatting abound. If you start to get nervous about
anything you're doing, wondering whether you're doing it "right", simply tell
yourself: "this is the way I choose to do it. I may choose another way at some
other time, but right now, I do it this way, and it's the right way for me."
In addition to your bio, if you have
publishing credits you'll want to mention them here. Your publishing credits
should be paid credits, rather than work you've done for promotional purposes,
or material for which you weren't paid.
What if you don’t have any
publishing credits? Everyone has to start somewhere. If you don’t have any
credits, don’t worry about them. If your proposal is excellent, and a publisher
wants to commission the book, then your lack of credits won’t count against you.
Now you'll know why you spent time
writing your blurb. The Overview, the description of your book, is the first
part of your proposal that agents and publishers will read. It's your book in a
nutshell. It's also merely an expanded version of your blurb.
I've included a sample
Overview below. It's from the proposal for my book Writing To Sell In The
Internet Age.
Sample Overview Writing To Sell In The Internet Age
Writing
To Sell In The Internet Age empowers writers by
revealing the immense new earning power that Internet technology gives them.
While many writers are comfortable using the Internet for email and research,
most are unaware that they now have many new opportunities, including:
Clever new ways to market their work and services with
tools like autoresponders, email mini-courses, ebooks, auctions, and
promotional ezines;
The opportunity to develop a loyal following of readers.
They can write and publish instantly, to a worldwide audience millions strong,
with tools like Web logs (blogs). This loyal following makes a writer more
appealing to traditional publishers;
The ability to target specific niches, and to garner an
income much more quickly than they can via traditional publishing routes. A
writer can write an ebook or report this month, and sell it forever.
The Internet
gives writers the power to be their own publisher and distributor by selling
their work directly to readers. Many writers are already taking advantage of the
possibilities. Judy Cullins, who's building an online reputation as "The Book
Coach", says of selling her ebooks online directly to readers: "The first
months, I had no idea at the time how powerful this method was. My income
bolted to over $3000 a month in less than a year."
The new rule for writers in the Internet age is: "Create,
promote, sell". What's amazing is that writers can do all this in one day, even
in hours. When I write a report, I can format it in PDF (Portable Document
Format) at the click of a key. That's the publishing done. I can then add the
report to the online store at my Web site in minutes --- distribution done. Then
I can send an announcement out to my subscribers (promotion done) and watch the
sales rolling in. Best of all I don't have to be anywhere in particular to do
this. I can do it as easily on a sun-drenched beach on the Great Barrier Reef
off northern Australia as I can in my home office in Sydney.
Are these capabilities within the reach of
non-technically-inclined writers? Yes! Although I've been writing about
software, computers and the Internet for many years, I'm by no means a geek. The
writers who shared their anecdotes and success stories for this book aren't
geeks either. They're writers who've seen opportunities and grabbed at them.
Many of these writer/ publisher/ entrepreneurs didn’t come to writing via
traditional publishing routes. Many started out as marketers, or entrepreneurs.
They looked at the Internet, saw how relatively easy it is to make money selling
information online, and worked out ways to do it. The Internet is the answer to
writers' prayers. It puts writers in control of their own destinies.
We see what we expect to see, so writers have seen the
Internet as a magazine-style "content" market. But because of the unlimited free
content online, few sites buy content. (This may change, as more sites with good
content change to a reader-pays business model.) Writers haven't yet seen that
the Internet is a completely new environment, where they can write what they
want to write, and can, without too much effort, make a good living.
Writing
To Sell In The Internet Age is a how-to for
writers to access their new opportunities, but it's also a how-they-did-it. I'll
be describing the avenues that writer-entrepreneurs are developing to use the
Internet to make excellent money in many new ways. These writers are exploring
their new options with amazement and delight. It's an exciting time. I'll be
including their stories and tips in this book to inspire other writers that they
can do it too.
I won’t
include descriptions of technology and the online environment. Information on
how to build a Web site, how to sell online, how to create a mailing list and
other technical minutiae is readily available online. Also because technology is
advancing so quickly, technical information rapidly becomes outdated. What won't
change however are the basic concepts of writing to sell in the Internet age.
Please don’t try to hype your book in
the Overview. Just tell your story as quickly and as clearly as you can.
Also, don’t
hold anything back. I've read many proposals from beginning writers where the
writer has tried to be coy: "For the complete details, you'll need to read the
book!" This kind of thing will work against you. You're asking a publisher to
invest around $30,000 to publish your book. Anyone who's going to spend that
amount of money wants all the details. Please provide them.
Your Overview can be as long, or as
short, as you feel it needs to be. Some proposals have one-page Overviews, in
others, the writer needs five pages to describe the book. Use your own judgement
here. If you need five pages, then by all means, use them. However, if your
Overview is long, make sure that you haven’t repeated information.
Next, you'll write the Promotions
section. In this section, you will show your publisher that you intend to go
all-out to promote your book. You can do this with an investment of money, or of
time. If you can do both, you should.
Company CEOs, sports figures,
celebrities and other well-heeled people often write books, or have books
written for them by ghost-writers. It's understood that any celebrity will hire
a public relations agency, and will spend a lot of money nudging the book up the
bestseller list. If you have money to spend on a public relations agency,
mention this in your proposal. Your publisher will be pleased that you
intend to get behind the book.
If you don’t have swags of cash lying
around that you can use to promote your book, you'll need to invest time. There
are a million ways you can promote your book, from pasting magnetic letters onto
your car and building a Web site to calling bookstores all over the country to
talk them into stocking your book. You can even act as your own PR agency, and
without anything other than an Internet connection and some time, can do a lot
of work to help sell your book. Anything that you do will be appreciated by the
publisher.
Here's the Promotions section from
Writing to Sell in the Internet Age.
My primary focus will be on online promotions. For two
reasons: I'm located in Australia, which means I can’t go the usual book store/
speaking venue route to promote the book. And I've been online since 1992,
pre-World Wide Web, and know how to promote online. (I wrote a book called
Making the Internet Work for Your Business, which is about setting up a
small business online (1998, Allen & Unwin)). Also, it's appropriate to promote
a book about selling in the age of the Internet on the Internet.
I have a popular Web site (http://www.digital-e.biz/)
and three email ezines, and I'll be promoting Writing To Sell In the Internet
Age heavily in all of them. I now spend ten hours a week working on my site
and my ezines, and on promotional activities for them, so I'll increase that to
15 hours, so that I regularly spend considerable time on the book's promotion.
My offline focus will be on getting press
coverage and radio interviews.
I will create a mini-Web site for Writing To Sell In the
Internet Age. This will be a three page sales site, the name of the site
to be taken from the book. Such mini-sites are called "buy, bookmark or leave"
sites. The entire site is similar to a direct mail letter: its only purpose is
to encourage the reader to buy the book. The beauty of such sites is that if
they're efficiently linked from other sites, such as my business site,
Digital-e, and other sites in which I have an interest, they quickly rank #1
in the search top search engines, that is, in Yahoo! and Google.com.
I'll develop an email newsletter for the book's buyers, and
prospective buyers. This monthly newsletter will update the information in the
book, and will include a link for readers to buy the book online.
I'll subscribe to a press release Web site, so I can send
out monthly online news releases for the book to thousands of media outlets in
the U.S., and if the book gets a Commonwealth sale, in the UK and Australia.
With the phone, email and fax, doing long-distance interviews for newspapers
and radio will be easy. Several of my books have attracted radio and newspaper
interviews, and I'm comfortable doing them.
I'll interact in online chat rooms, conferences, and in
mailing lists, subtly promoting the book.
I'll create a private discussion group for the book's
readers in the "Talk" forums section of my Digital-e Web site, so that readers
can ask questions and interact with me directly. As this forum grows, I'll
appoint reader-moderators for the various discussions.
On Day Two, you did a lot of work on
assessing the market for your book. Here's where you use all that information.
Choose anywhere from three to five books which you estimate will be your book's
main competitors. Describe how your book is different from these books, and how
your book fills a niche in the marketplace.
Include the names of the
books, the authors, and the year of publication. If these books were published
several years ago, this is all to the good.
Write your sample chapter using the A,B,
and C method that we talked about. I've also described a fast method that I use
to write chapters of books below. If you prefer to use a tape recorder, then by
all means do that. I prefer to write first drafts by hand, on yellow legal pads.
I find that I can relax and enjoy myself when I write by hand. Whichever method
you use, just settle down and write the first chapter.
Note: invariably, after you
sell the proposal, and are writing the book, you will make changes and it's
likely that the final first chapter you write will be very different from the
version you're writing today. Since that's the case, just write as quickly as
you can.
Writing a chapter of a book is like
writing a long article. Most chapters are somewhere between 2000 and 4000 words,
but if you want to write a short chapter of 1500 words, that's fine too.
Remember that you can’t do any of this wrong, and it's your choice.
Here's a method that I use
when I'm writing a chapter in a book. Adapt it to your own needs.
Then take five minutes and write out
exactly what you want to include in this chapter. This isn't an outline; your
notes can be as brief, or as lengthy as you wish. I usually talk to myself on
paper, like this:
"What do I
want to cover in this chapter? I want the reader to understand (this process/
theory/ idea/ method). I also want to include these five anecdotes. What do the
anecdotes show? The first one shows that…"
By talking to
myself like this, I eliminate performance anxiety. Some writers do the same
thing by writing their chapters as letters: they can take it easy, as if they're
talking to a friend. The big benefit of using a method like this is that it does
away with formality and stiffness.
When you feel ready, start to write. As
you're writing, just get the words out as quickly as you can. It's useful to set
a goal for the number of pages in an hour. I usually aim for three pages an
hour. However, if you feel that having a number of pages that you "must" write
an hour stresses you, then don't set a goal like this.
When you're writing:
Turn on the answering machine, and
turn off your email program;
Close your office door;
Set yourself goal of either pages
written, or words written;
Don’t reread your notes. If you need
to look something up, just write "tk" which is an old printer's mark meaning
"to come", and keep on writing. If you stop to look something up it may derail
your train of thought. Plus you may think: oh, I need to cover this, and
this, and this must go in. Assure yourself that you won’t be able to cover
everything. Trust that your subconscious will deliver the material which needs
to go into the first chapter ;
Keep going even if you're sure that
what you’re writing is less than your best work. You can tidy it all up later.
Just get the words down.
If you find that your writing goes
slowly with this first chapter, that's normal. First chapters are always slow to
write, because you haven’t found the right tone and voice in which to write your
book. Once you find those, the writing will go much more easily. Because first
chapters are always slow, it's important that you don’t leave your desk
until you've written the number of words you set out to write.
When you've completed the first chapter,
print out the entire proposal. Then go and do something else --- go and watch a
movie, or have lunch. Take a good break of at least a couple of hours before you
come back to read your proposal.
Just like your writing, your revision
will go through several phases. Copyediting, or line revision, where you fiddle
with word choices and grammar, comes last.
Read the proposal straight through. Keep
note-making to a minimum. This is so you can get a sense of how the material
reads. When you've finished this initial read-through, ask yourself whether what
you've written stays close to your blurb. If it doesn’t, you can either change
your blurb --- perhaps you've been inspired with some creative new ideas --- or
you can change your proposal.
While this read-through is
fresh in your mind, write out your impressions. Have you covered most of what
you want to include? What else do you think the proposal needs?
Before you start cutting, rename your
document (Version B or B1, or whatever naming process makes sense to you).
Now go
through the proposal and take out the material that you've decided you want to
eliminate. If it's too painful to simply hit the Delete key, cut the material
and paste it into another document.
In this pass through the proposal, add
the material the proposal needs. Perhaps you've done some additional research
--- write up all the material you want to include.
You've completed your book proposal. Now
comes the fun part, selling your proposal. If you need any help with this, you
can contact me at any time. Don't forget to send me a copy of the ms for your
free appraisal.
7 Days To Easy Money: Copywriting
Success shows writers how to set up their own
copywriting services business in seven days. Its target market is writers,
professional or aspiring, who want to make money from their writing skills.
Melanie Rigney, editor of Writer's Digest magazine, estimated that ten per cent
of the US population aspire to write.
From the
book'sIntroduction:
Want to make REALmoney writing?
You know you can write. Maybe you're even making money
writing. But are you making enough money writing? Or is it just a
hobby, costing you more in computers, postage and paper than you're earning?
According to writers' organizations, 95 per cent of writers never make enough
money to quit their day job.
What about the top five per cent of writers --- they're
making big money, right? A small proportion of the top five per cent sure are.
They're the headliners --- brand name writers like Stephen King and Dean Koontz.
Journeymen (and women) writers are doing OK too. They're the genre writers,
writing romance, mystery and suspense, and non-fiction. Writers in this group
spend a lot of time looking over their shoulder. Will their publisher accept
their next book? Are they writing enough? (Gotta turn in at least two books this
year.) What nasty reviews of their latest book will they find on Amazon.com
today? Magazine writers may do well too if they combine magazine writing with
writing books.
If you want to make real money from your writing skills, you
can. And you can do it easily and quickly, in seven days. How? Start a
copywriting services business.
I've been making good money as a copywriter for over 25
years. It's fun, creative and lucrative.
Most writers are aren’t skilled at
business, and don't know how business works. They're unaware that businesses
hire writers, so they pitch their work to overcrowded markets. Copywriters
(business writers) write to meet the communications needs of large and small
businesses. The material they write includes marketing communications,
proposals, public relations material, and Web site content.
If
copywriting does register as a potential market, writers don’t have any easy,
practical guides to help them to access this market. While bookshop shelves are
packed with how-to guides to writing novels and magazine articles, the small
number of available copywriting books are dry and dull, and make copywriting
sound about as much fun as doing your own dentistry.
7 Days To Easy Money:
Copywriting Success aims to correct this. It's aimed at both professional
and new writers. At the end of seven days, the enthusiastic new copywriter will
have all the information and experience she needs to set up her own copywriting
services business and make money.
Does the material work? Yes!
I've been teaching this material in online and offline classes, and selling it
online as an ebook. I'll be including many exercises and samples: sample
exercises written by my students, sample ads, sample press releases, templates,
and check lists. And because the material is based on my own 25 years of
copywriting experience, I'll be including lots of anecdotes and insider
information.
True to its "easy money" title, the book
focuses on teaching the reader how to get copywriting work, not just on
copywriting techniques. As far as I can tell, none of the other copywriting
books currently available teach copywriters how to prospect for new business.
And yet, going by my experience with students and my monitoring of writers'
groups online, this information is what writers need most.
Other
copywriting books just don't provide the nitty-gritty of self-promotion and
marketing. Writers need details and encouragement to market themselves and their
services, so I'll be making this book as forceful and motivating (and fun) as I
can. One of my students said that she until she did one of my free sample
courses, she wasn't aware that copywriting was something she could do. Now she
knows that it is.
That's the
takeaway I want to give readers: you can make money, easily, from your
writing skills, and you can make it very quickly, no long apprenticeship needed.
Readers will find it easy to work with
this book. It's set up in the form of days and weeks, with tasks and exercises
for each chapter. As the reader does the exercises for each day, she's doing the
work involved in setting up her own copywriting services business. No wasted
time – she's working on developing her own small business from the very first
day!
Each chapter contains:
·Samples, written by my students, so
that readers feel more comfortable with the work.
·Copywriting techniques for the reader
to refer to as she begins to work as a copywriter.
·Exercises. The reader will use the
exercises to build her copywriters' portfolio.
Australian author and journalist Angela
Booth has been writing successfully for 25 years. She writes about business,
technology, women's issues, and creativity. Her books include: LifeTime:
Better Time Management in 21 Days, Home Sweet Office: Your Home Office,
Improve Your Memory in 21 Days, and Making the Internet Work for Your
Business. Her feature articles have appeared in magazines like Energy for
Women, The Australian Women's Weekly, Woman's Day, New Idea, Vogue, and numerous
other print and online magazines.
She's also a working
copywriter, writing copy for businesses ranging from international corporations
to small businesses with less than five employees.
Feature
articles for mass market women's magazines in Australia and the US, including
The Australian Women's Weekly, Woman's Day, New Idea, Energy for Women,
Writer's Digest and Vogue;
Feature
articles for computer and technology magazines;
Computer
manuals;
Content
work for Web sites and Internet newsletters (her online articles number in the
hundreds, find them by entering the search query "Angela Booth +articles" into
Google.com);
Business
books for major publishers, including many books in Prentice Hall's WorkWise
series (translated into several Asian and European languages);
A series of
romance novels for Macdonald Futura UK.
At her Digital-e --- Info to Go Web
site:
http://www.digital-e.biz/ Angela Booth publishers three popular ezines:
Creative Small Biz and Your EveryDay Write, which are free to subscribers, and
Freelance Copy Write, which has paying subscribers. She also teaches writing
courses via email.
Angela Booth is a writer, a business
person and a teacher. She knows copywriting both from the writer's and business
owner's points of view, and because she teaches writing, she knows how to pass
her skills on to others.
She has
written professionally for most of her adult life; everything from romance
novels to computer manuals. She understands how writers work and think. She has
also managed several successful small businesses. She first developed her
copywriting skills when she managed a dog training and boarding business, and
found advertising so expensive that it was vital that each ad pulled, and pulled
well.
Her love of
writing and fascination with the creative process also led her to teach popular
writing courses at community colleges, and now online. The material in 7 Days
To Easy Money: Copywriting Success has been tested by her students, and it
works.
This is a good general reference to
copywriting techniques. It's aimed at small business or marketing people who
want a simple copywriting guide. It's not directed at the same market (writers)
as 7 Days To Easy Money: Copywriting Success, and provides no instruction
on how to set up a copywriting services business.
Another general reference to copywriting
techniques, aimed at business and marketing people. Again, it's not aimed at
writers, nor does it help in setting up in business as a copywriter.
This book comes closest to targeting the
same market as 7 Days To Easy Money: Copywriting Success.
Peter
Bowerman has written a useful book. His background as a marketing executive
gives him a strong sales emphasis. However, because he has a sales and marketing
background, and not a background as a writer, he doesn't cover the marketing of
a copywriting services business. (He calls copywriting freelance commercial
writing.)
His
experience with marketing make marketing processes self-evident to him, and he
tends to gloss over them. However, marketing doesn’t come naturally to many
writers, as I've seen with my students. They struggle with marketing, and need
instruction in basic marketing processes and concepts.
Who will buy 7 Days To Easy Money: Copywriting
Success and why?
The strongest target group likely to buy
this book is writers, whether employed or freelance, who want to diversify, and
develop another income stream. Aspiring writers are also likely to buy it,
seeing it as an opportunity to earn while they learn and develop their writing
skills.
Additional target groups include:
colleges which teach writing courses;
people laid off from corporate
marketing jobs – they will already have an awareness of the work done by
copywriters; and
early retirees, who want to develop
an income, but don't want or need full employment.
My primary focus will be on online
promotions. For two reasons: I'm located in Australia, which means I can’t go
the usual book store/ speaking venue route to promote the book. I also have a
greater depth of experience in the online world. I've been online since 1993,
pre-World Wide Web, and know how to promote online. (I wrote a book called
Making the Internet Work for Your Business, which is about setting up a
small business online (1998, Allen & Unwin)).
I have a
popular Web site (http://www.digital-e.biz/)
and three email ezines, and I'll be promoting 7 Days To Easy Money:
Copywriting Success heavily in all of them. I now spend ten hours a week
working on my site and my ezines, and on promotional activities for them, so
I'll increase that to 15 hours, so that I regularly spend considerable time on
the book's promotion.
I will create a mini-Web site for
7 Days To Easy Money: Copywriting Success. This will be a three page sales
site, the name of the site to be taken from the book. Such mini-sites are
called "buy, bookmark or leave" sites. The entire site is similar to a direct
mail letter: its only purpose is to encourage the reader to buy the book. The
beauty of such sites is that if they're efficiently linked from other sites,
such as my business site, Digital-e, and other sites in which I have an
interest, they quickly rank #1 in the search top search engines, that is, in
Yahoo! and Google.com.
I'll develop an email newsletter for
the book's buyers, and prospective buyers. This monthly newsletter will update
the information in the book, and will include a link for readers to buy the
book online.
I'll subscribe to a press release Web
site, so I can send out monthly online news releases for the book to thousands
of media outlets in the U.S., and if the book gets a Commonwealth sale, in the
UK and Australia. With the phone, email and fax, doing long-distance
interviews for newspapers and radio will be easy. Several of my books have
attracted radio and newspaper interviews, and I'm comfortable doing them.
I'll interact in online chat rooms,
conferences, and in mailing lists, subtly promoting the book.
I'll create a private discussion
group for the book's readers in the "Talk" forums section of my Digital-e Web
site, so that readers can ask questions and interact with me directly. As this
forum grows, I'll appoint reader-moderators for the various discussions.
On Day Two, the reader takes the first
steps in marketing her skills. She creates her bio, and begins to compile her
portfolio, and writes a direct mail letter to sell her skills.
Includes:
Copywriter's bio. The reader learns
how to leverage her current experience and skills, and writes her first
copywriter's bio. Her current experience and skills also show her which
businesses she could begin targeting in her marketing. Includes sample bios.
(I include sample bios written by my students – real-life student
samples are included right throughout the book.)
Copywriter's portfolio. The reader
begins creating her copywriter's portfolio by creating writing samples. An
explanation of an electronic portfolio.
Market research. The reader learns
how to find markets, and a prospecting routine is discussed in detail.
First direct mail letter. The reader
writes her first direct mail letter to send out to prospects; a sample letter
is provided.
Day Three's theme is "news". The reader
learns to write longer copy, including news releases and newsletters. She writes
a news release for her new copywriting services business, and collects sample
newsletters to study. She also learns the "Brain Dead" writing process, so that
she can quickly write copy, to order, and to deadline.
Includes:
News releases step-by-step. The
reader learns to write a news release. She also targets media outlets to which
she'll send her first news release.
Publicity is better (and cheaper)
than paid advertising, so the reader writes a news release for her new
copywriting services business. A sample news release is provided.
Newsletters are excellent promotional
tools. The reader discovers the elements of a newsletter. A sample online
newsletter is provided.
Day Three copywriting techniques.
Includes how to follow up on initial contact, and
turn prospects into clients.
In Day Four, the reader will become more
comfortable with writing long copy PR, and develop skill creating and working
with ideas. She'll price her services. She will also create a tagline (slogan)
for her business.
Includes:
Concepts and communications plans.
The reader learns how to develop a concept and communications plan for a
client with a new product or service.
Pricing. The reader learns how to
price her copywriting services.
Day Four copywriting techniques. How
to use incentives in copy. Create a Public Relations media kit: the reader
discovers how to create a media kit for her new business, and for her clients.
More on writing news releases --- how to avoid having a news release perceived
as an ad.
Sidebar: What should a copywriter
know? A method for the reader to become comfortable writing the kinds of copy
she's never written before.
In Day Five, the reader considers her
past experience, and her interests, and considers building a copywriting
specialty. The reader also learns to build her copywriting practice one client
at a time, and how to use each client's circle of contacts to build her own
contact base.
Includes:
Copywriting specialization --- yes or
no?
Build a specialty in three easy
steps.
Networking and partnering with
others. Copywriters who work completely alone limit themselves to small
projects --- and a smaller income. The reader learns to become comfortable
sub-contracting work like graphic design, and also how to work as a
sub-contractor for others.
Difficult clients. The reader learns
to rely on her copywriting services agreement.
Day five copywriting techniques. Add
punch to copy. Find copywriting jobs online. Create a mini-proposal.
In Day Six, the reader works on
marketing her new business. The reader realizes the importance of marketing
every day, and that all the marketing she does is cumulative. The reader creates
a marketing plan. We discuss ten easy marketing tools.
Includes:
Create a marketing plan for your
copywriting business. Why creating a marketing plan is important, what to
include in the plan. Regular review of the plan for what's working and what
isn't.
Ten marketing tools you can use.
Includes: Internet job boards, building a Web site, writing promotional
articles, and joining organizations.
In Day Seven, the reader discovers
performance copywriting: writing for radio and television, and writing speeches
and presentations, as well as writing for video and multimedia (CD-ROMs).
Performance copywriting is a huge field.
Includes:
Conversational style. The importance
of developing a natural, jargon-free, conversational style when writing for
performance.
Video scripts, speeches and sales
presentations.
Copywriting for radio and TV.
Copywriting how-to: writing radio
spots; working with multimedia companies.
In Week Two, the reader continues to
build her business, by creating a more comprehensive marketing plan. She
continues with the work of Week One, marketing her business.
Includes:
More
information on marketing.
Marketing
using online resources. The reader learns to build an "almost instant" Web
site, which she can use as an online portfolio.
The reader
learns about pitching, and how presentations can build her business.
Strategic
alliances. The reader learns how to partner with other people like graphic
designers so that she can target larger businesses.
In Week Four, the reader will do more
work on promoting her business. She will develop a media kit for her business.
This chapter
includes a final section: "The end of this book; the beginning of your new life
as a successful copywriter". This section is a final wrap-up, with some
reminders, and encouragement and motivation for the reader.
You know you
can write. Maybe you're even making money writing. But are you making enough
money writing? Or is it just a hobby, costing you more in computers, postage and
paper than you're earning? According to writers' organizations, 95 per cent of
writers never make enough money to quit their day job.
What about the top five per
cent of writers --- they're making big money, right? A small proportion of the
top five per cent sure are. They're the headliners --- brand name writers like
Stephen King and Dean Koontz. Journeymen (and women) writers are doing OK too.
They're the genre writers, writing romance, mystery and suspense, and
non-fiction. Writers in this group spend a lot of time looking over their
shoulder. Will their publisher accept their next book? Are they writing enough?
(Gotta turn in at least two books this year.) What nasty reviews of their latest
book will they find on Amazon.com today? Magazine writers may do well too if
they combine magazine writing with writing books.
If you want
to make real money from your writing skills, you can. And you can do it easily
and quickly, in seven days. How? Start a copywriting services business.
I've been
making good money as a copywriter for over 25 years. It's fun, lucrative and
creative.
Copywriters write for business. They
write the words that educate, sell and instruct--- everyday words. The words on
ads, leaflets, brochures, press releases, product instructions and labels,
newsletters, direct mail, and on Web sites. These words are everywhere, and are
invisible to most people. To copywriters, all these words indicate a market.
Copywriters can make excellent money: the most experienced, enterprising, and
productive copywriters scoop in a comfortable six figures annually.
There's
nothing fancy or magical about the words copywriters produce. In fact, if you
can write clear instructions or a letter, you can write copy. You don't have to
be a great writer to be an excellent copywriter, but you do need to recognize
and be able to use the attributes of both fiction (evoke emotion) and
non-fiction (be clear) in your writing.
Of all the
writing I do, I love copywriting most. It's fun, it's easy, it's creative ---
and the biggest plus of all, it's usually short. Whatever writing you're
currently doing, whether it's novels, short stories, or magazine articles,
you'll feel at home with copywriting, and it will be an additional income stream
for you. If you're a new writer, the skills you learn while writing copy easily
transfer to other kinds of writing.
Here's the successful freelance
copywriter's mindset. You:
know that you're surrounded by copy
every day, everywhere you look. Radio, TV, the Internet, newspapers, food
product labels, signs: they all contain words, and a copywriter wrote them. To
most people, copy is so ubiquitous it's invisible. To you, copy signals a
market. You're observant and aware, and every time a message catches your eye,
even if it's only a street sign, you're thinking: "Hmmm… a potential market";
are interested in getting your
client's message across;
are prepared to market, and then
market your services some more.
When you're writing copy, you're writing
it for someone else, to do a specific job. That job may be to get someone to buy
something, or to do something. In the case of a news release, you may be trying
disseminate information or to change someone's opinion. Whatever you're writing,
the message is the client's, and your job as copywriter is to make that message
crystal clear.
If the copy
fails --- and you won't need to look far to find poor copy --- it's because the
copywriter failed to deliver the message. When I catch myself thinking about a
print ad or a TV commercial: "Woeful writing"! I ask myself: "Did I get the
message?" If the answer is "I have no idea what they're selling and I could care
less", it's bad copy. On the other hand, if my answer is: "I hate everything
about it, but I know what they're selling and what they want me to do", it's
good copy.
There's a huge market for copywriting
services. Every business uses copy. You may need to educate smaller businesses
on what you can do for them, but the market is there. If you've tried to sell
other kinds of writing, like novels or magazine articles, the openness of the
copywriting market will come as a huge relief. It's not hard to find copywriting
work.
However, you
do need to market. As a group, we writers are not the world's hustlers. We're
not pushy or extroverted. We'd rather write than sell our services by
telemarketing or by appearing unannounced in a prospect's office.
Take heart.
If you're by nature shy, you can make initial contact with clients via postal
mail or e-mail, or by some other gentle, but resourceful method of
self-promotion. You don’t have to change your personality to find effective and
fun ways to promote your services.
That's all it
takes to make money freelance copywriting. Know that copy is everywhere and that
it's all a market, get your client's message across, and market yourself.
It's no exaggeration to say that the
sky's the limit on your earning potential as a copywriter. If you want to push
your marketing, within a couple of years, you can be earning a six-figure income
without breaking much of a sweat.
When you're just starting
out, you'll charge somewhere between $50 and $100 an hour. As your experience
grows, you'll charge more. If you have expertise in areas like finance, real
estate, and multimedia, you can charge much more right away.
Of course, your hourly rate
is not all gravy. You need to figure your expenses and overheads into that tally
before you start to calculate the profits. But you can make money copywriting, a
lot of money, because all businesses need to communicate and you're an expert
communicator.
Welcome to
the wonderful world of copy! Let's get started.
On Day One, you'll learn about the
client brief, and will develop your own briefing sheet. You'll also learn a
nifty technique to help you write copy anywhere, anytime.
In copywriting, you don’t need to do it
all yourself. In fact, you can't. Your copy is based on whatever you're trying
to sell. This is a huge plus, because the product always gives you somewhere to
start writing. And the more you know about the product, the better. Your client
hands you the product, or tells you about it, or explains the service, or gives
you a guided tour of the factory, and tells you what he wants: a sales letter, a
brochure or a news release. This is "the brief", your instructions.
After he's
explained the brief, the most important question to ask your client is: "What do
you want the reader to do after he reads this?" (Or the viewer or listener to
do, if you're writing broadcast copy or for a Web site.) You're asking what the
customer's response should be. Getting the customer's response is your goal.
The response could be: to call a phone number, to attend a sale, or to order
from the catalog.
Write down
the customers' required response. While I'm working on a job, I like to stick a
reminder note onto my computer monitor: "Call client number", for example, or
"order product". When you get into the excitement of writing the copy, your
thoughts can get tangled. It's easy to forget the response. Writing the required
response down, and keeping it visible, means that it's always at the forefront
of your mind.
If you've been hired by an agency, you'll be given a brief.
If you're hired by a business unused to working with copywriters, you'll need
to fill out your own briefing sheet. The sample briefing sheet below contains
information that's useful to have. Tailor it to your own requirements.
Computer-format your briefing sheet with adequate spacing so it's easy to fill
in, then print out some copies and keep them by the phone.
SAMPLE BRIEFING SHEET (Figure 1)
Type of
product or service:
Promotional
name of the product or service:
Any other
names?
A short
description:
What three
major points do you want to make?
What's the
primary reason the customer would be interested in this product or service?
A technical
description (or ask for the manufacturer's specification):
Options (colors,
material etc):
Used for,
and how?
Target
audience:
Benefits over
competing products:
Comments:
Customer
response required:
Are there any disclaimers, or legal requirements which need
to be mentioned in the copy?
ALWAYS SEND THE CLIENT YOUR WRITING
SERVICES AGREEMENT, as soon as you accept the brief. Yes, it's in caps, and I'm
shouting, and the reason is this: all the hassles you're likely to encounter
during your copywriting career can be countered with an effective agreement,
signed by the client, BEFORE you start work. Whenever I accept a brief, and omit
this vital step, something goes wrong. So do it. Always. No exceptions.
When you're
working as a sub-contractor with an agency, whether the agency is for
advertising, Public Relations, or multimedia services, the agency will usually
have its own agreement that you'll be asked to sign. Most agency agreements are
straightforward. Sometimes they're not. Strike out anything in the agency
agreement you don't agree with, initial your strikeouts, sign the agreement and
send it back.
Here's the Writing Services Agreement I use. It's not
fancy, but it does the job. Feel free to use it, or parts of it, to create
your own agreement.
SAMPLE WRITING SERVICES AGREEMENT
(Figure 2.)
Agreement
for Writing Services
REF: XXXX
DATE:
Client:
Project:
Fee:
Advance
retainer:
Balance due
on completion:
Notes:
Your
signature below authorizes me to write copy for the project above, for the fee
stated. (You can return the agreement via postal mail, fax, or e-mail.)
Two revisions
are included if requested within five days of your receipt of copy, and are not
based on a change in the assignment brief made after copy is submitted. Balance
of payment is due on receipt of the invoice.
You
understand that the assignment is work done for hire, which gives you the
copyright. You release me from any responsibility for legal or regulatory
problems that may arise from the use of any copy I write for you.
Memorize this. I don't know who to
credit for this copywriting formula, but AIDA (Attract, Interest, Desire,
Action) is a handy copy checklist. All the copy you write should include these
elements.
The more copy you write for clients each
day, the more money you make. Therefore, you need a method to get copy written
fast, without dithering and wasting time wondering what to do next. The
following method works. I recommend that you use it on every job. More play than
work, it's fun and stress-free. Try it.
After you've been briefed by the client,
your first step is research. Even if you're sure that you have all the
information you need, doing a bit of hunting and gathering for more information
lets your subconscious mind brood on the task before you start writing.
My aim when I
research is always to get what I call "the Click". The Click is part concept,
part inspiration, part structure, and part my subconscious mind waving at me and
yelling: "Yoohoo! We're ready, you can get started."
Your research
period may be only a few minutes. When I was asked to do a fast rewrite job on
five 30-second radio spots for a jewellery store, out of the two hours I had, I
spent half an hour on research. Although I'd worked for the client previously,
and knew what he was selling, I wanted to get a new angle, a unique fact –
something different that I could base the copy around. I found it. I learned
that gold is eternal: it's older than our solar system. That nugget of info
inspired me, and let me breeze through writing the five spots.
Unless I'd
been prepared to "waste" time on the research, I would have had a much harder
time writing the copy, and the copy wouldn't have had any creative sparkle.
The biggest stumbling block for a writer
is the blank page or computer screen. Writers get performance anxiety just like
actors get stage fright. Luckily, that block is easy to conquer when you're
writing copy.
Copy is
conversational. If you're used to writing novels or non-fiction, this can be
hard to achieve at first. Good copy is simply communication, rather than
literary elegance, and you don't have to agonize over grammar. If you're getting
your client's message across, you're writing good copy.
Here's a
handy trick to get words on the page. When you start writing, imagine you're
talking to someone, telling her about the product. It helps to type something
like: "Jeannie, I just found this great new thing, let me tell you about it…"
Then describe the product.
Or, if you're
writing longer copy, longer than a typical page of 250 words, talk into a tape
recorder, and pretend to tell someone about the product, then transcribe the
tape. Either of these techniques will stop you using a stiff and formal voice.
You'll be using an informal conversational style and tone, which is appropriate
for copy.
You'll also
notice you've conquered the blank page.
You've got a page of conversation. Print
it out if it's on the computer. Without thinking about it too much, circle any
words which appeal to you. Circle five words. At this stage, you're nowhere near
writing the final copy. You're making creative connections. This method of
brainstorming uses your right and left brain.
Starting with
the first word, write down 20 word associations you come up with. You can use a
cluster diagram, or just make a list.
The key to
getting results with this method is lack of effort on your part. Just do the
process mechanically, and write down the first words which pop into your mind.
When you've
done this, go and do something else for a while. Have a cup of coffee, or take
the dog for a walk. Sometimes you'll get a rush job, and you won’t be able to
take much time away, but no matter how rushed you are, take at least ten
minutes.
When you sit down at your desk, write a
first draft as quickly as you can. Don’t refer to any of the word lists you
made. Be casual, be confident, and get those words down.
Your first
draft is your first take on the job. This gives you something to work with, and
you can tweak it until you're satisfied.
As you become
more experienced, your first draft comes close to being your final draft. I
usually send my second draft to the client as the "Initial Draft". I offer two
free revisions of this draft in my writing agreement. I've found that if I'm
working for the client directly, then either the client accepts my Initial
Draft, and says "Great! Just what I want", or I do one minor revision. When
working with an agency, I rarely get asked to do revisions.
My feeling is
that because I've done a lot of preparation (research, getting a conversation
down, and brainstorming), I'm pretty much on target when I send the Initial
Draft. Therefore, the preparation work you do is important. Don’t try to jump
into a final draft that you intend to send to the client when you sit down at
the computer. You'll freeze up. Having a process that you work through leaves
plenty of room for discovery ---and all writing is discovery --- and creativity,
and this shows in the final results. Even if you don’t use any of the material
you created in your preparation in the final draft, the preparation process
loosens you up and helps you to write creative copy day after day, because
you're not working --- you're playing, and your subconscious mind loves to play.
( Each chapter contains Copywriter's
How-Tos, copywriting reference articles.)
A perfect, selling ad? I lied. There's
no such animal as the perfect, works-every-time, selling ad. But I got you to
read this far, didn’t I? That was the title's purpose --- see Tip Two: Write an
attention-grabbing headline.
I didn't lie
about these tips, though. They're easy and fun to use.
Although you're writing for a crowd,
it's easiest to write if you imagine you're talking to one particular person.
You can even start writing your first
draft with a salutation, as if you were writing a letter: Start with "Dear
Elli", and keep writing.
Who is this
person? Is she old, young, married? Where does she live? What's her life like?
What does she want most? What's she scared of? Why would she be interested in
your product? What difference would it make in her life?
Professional
copywriters spend a lot of time in this phase of the writing process. You can't
motivate someone if you don’t know who they are.
Your headline is vital. No one is
looking for your ad. You've got to wave and yell at them to get their attention.
If you don’t get their attention, no sale.
Write a trial
headline to get yourself started. This probably won’t be the headline you'll
use. However, with a trial headline, you've got a corral for your copy. You're
writing to that headline.
When you've
written a draft of the ad, force yourself, with a timer, to write another twenty
headlines in five minutes. (Read the rest of the tips and write the benefits and
the response before you write a draft.)
Don't try too
hard. Who cares if they're all junk? You're writing lots of headlines to get
your subconscious mind to take you seriously, and throw up the PERFECT headline.
You'll never achieve this perfect headline with conscious thought. It's a gift
from your subconscious, but you have to goose it into cooperating.
You may find
a headline you like more than your initial headline. Just substitute it, if it
fits. If it doesn’t you can write another version of the ad to fit that
headline's concept.
I've lost count of the number of ads
I've seen everywhere from the Yellow Pages to full display ads costing thousands
in magazines, where the copywriter and everyone else forgot the response.
You must tell
the reader what you want him to do. You must ask for the sale. Ask the reader to
do something: call a number, come into the store, go to a Web site.
This is so
important that when I'm writing an ad I always write the required response on a
sticky note and tape it to a corner of my monitor. I tape it onto the screen
itself, so I can't miss it. (Yes, I have been guilty of forgetting the response.
And very embarrassing it was too.)
In this exercise, you'll put yourself in
the client's shoes. You're a furniture manufacturer. Your business is expanding.
You're inserting a quarter page display ad in your local Yellow Pages. You pick
up the phone and call a local copywriter. (You know her because she called you
and left her contact details.) What instructions do you give the copywriter?
Write 100 words of the manufacturer's instructions to the copywriter.
A pen manufacturer has hired you to
write copy for a newspaper display ad. Pick your favorite pen, and do some
research on pens. Next, in 150 words, tell me about the pen. Start with "Angela,
let me tell you about this pen…" Remember, that you're talking, not writing.
Write as you'd speak. Also remember that this is not copy, this is just you,
telling a friend about your pen.
In Exercise One, you wrote a brief. Now
write 30 headlines you could use for the ad which you'll write from the brief.
Remember, this is a quarter page ad for the Yellow Pages. Read the Yellow Pages,
and check out some of the ads before you start.
(When you're writing copy for clients,
it's good practice to write at least 20 to 50 headlines (some master copywriters
write 150 headlines), before they set to work on the ad itself.)